Well, completely unknown to the ad
agency, they had almost stumbled onto a breakthrough marketing
concept. Telling people the reason why you are doing something
is one of the most powerful influencers of human behavior.
Robert Cialdini, Ph.D. in his book
"Influence: The Psychology of Persuasion" talks about
an experiment by Harvard social psychologist, Ellen Langer, that
concluded people like to have a reason for what they do. Her
experiment consisted of people waiting in line to use a library
copy machine and then having experimenters ask to get ahead in
line.
The first excuse used was
"Excuse me, I have five pages. May I use the Xerox machine
because I'm in a rush?" This request coupled with a reason
was successful 94% of the time. However when the experimenter
made a request only: "Excuse me, I have five pages. May I
use the Xerox machine?" this request was only granted 60%
of the time. A significant drop!
Okay now for the shocker.
It may seem like the difference
between those two requests was the additional information of
"because I'm in a rush."
That's not the case.
Because in a third experimenter, the
experimenter asks "Excuse me, I have five pages. May I use
the Xerox machine because I have to make some copies?"
There's no reason mentioned or new information presented, just
the words "because."
This time a full 93% of the people
said yes simply due to the word 'BECAUSE'! And it didn't even
matter that there was no reason given. Just the word because
triggered a magic response.
More psychological
'triggers' that can massively increase your sales letter
success, whether you're writing online sales copy or direct mail
copy.
Max Sackheim, famous for the
long-running ad "Do You Make These Mistakes In
English" and originator of the book-of-the-month concept,
says "Whenever you make a claim or special offer in your
advertising, come up with an honest reason why, and then state
it sincerely. You'll sell many more products this way."
Here are two examples:
• Instead of yelling 'SALE' like
so many other stores would, John E. Powers, one of the top
copywriters wrote this ad giving prospects a legitimate reason
why they should spend their money at a Pittsburgh department
store in severe financial trouble: "We are bankrupt. We owe
$125,000 more than we can pay, and this announcement will bring
our creditors down on our necks. But if you come and *buy*
tomorrow, we shall have the money to meet them. If not, we shall
go to the wall." This ad was responsible for saving
the store.
• Another ad written for a
different merchant by Powers proclaimed, "We have a lot of
rotten raincoats we want to get rid of." This sold out the
merchant's entire inventory of raincoats by the next morning.
And this powerful sales
letter and ad copy strategy works just as well today.
Using this secret weapon, I helped a
medical equipment company produce a massive 1,073% return on
investment simply using "reason-why" copy.
The premise was how we can sell a
product for the incredibly low price of only $477. Regularly
this product sells for about $695 - $895. Then the ad explained
that the price was so low was because the manufacturer wanted to
gain market share and get more nurses and doctors accustomed to
using their product. It was a huge winner and a big moneymaker
for the client.
Here's how can you apply
emotional, psychological triggers to your sales letter copy:
Let's say you have a slow time of
year and you want to increase your business during this period.
Write a simple sales letter to your customers making a special
offer, only good during your slow period.
Maybe you'll throw in extra free
bonuses, extra services, or special discounts simply because it
is your "slow time" and you need to pay your staff
anyway.
Let people in "behind the
scenes" at your company...
• Are you overstocked on
merchandise because for some reason customers only want the
deluxe widget - but you ordered tons of the basic one?
• Did you have a flood and you
need to liquidate your inventory?
• Do you need to raise cash so you
can pay for your nosejob?
Whatever the reason is, tell your
prospects the truth.
For some reason everyone wants to be
mysterious about their business. If you're lowering the price
nobody thinks you're doing it just because you're "such a
nice guy". So let people know the reason why.
I know this probably goes against
every grain of business sense, but I promise if you give people
a good, believable reason why they'll respond with an open minds
and more importantly, an open wallet.
(c) Surefire Marketing, Inc.
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